Whisky (solo) - Dżem

Witam. Po wielu godzinach żmudnej pracy udało mi się opracować solo do pamiętnego wykonania 
"Whisky" Dżemu z koncertu Rawa Blues z '93 roku. Z pewnością nie jest to opracowanie idealne, 
ale jestem z niego bardzo zadowolony. Czekam na spostrzeżenia i wskazówki, jeśli ktoś zauważyłby
coś co można by ewentualnie poprawić lub zagrać inaczej. A teraz do solówki i.. enjoy:))

Podaję jeszcze linka z moim wykonaniem, można skonsultować z tabulaturą.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sENjVPRFMww&feature=plcp

Podkład do solówki:
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F C G G x7
F C G C9 G C9 ---> czyli powrót do standardowej melodii "Whisky" i do refrenu
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------------------8p7-------------------------------------------10-7-8p7-8h10-7-------
-----8-8----8h10~-----8--8----------------------------------8-------------------8~~---
--/9-----9-----------------7h9-7~~--5p4-5p4---------------7---7-----------------------
---------------------------------------------5-5~0-5-7s9------------------------------
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-------12s15~-15-12h15p12--------------------------------------10s12-----15b17-15b17--
--8s15--------------------12h13~12h13p12-----------------------------12~~-------------
-----------------------------------------14-14p12--------12---------------------------
---------------------------------------------------14p12----14------------------------
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--15-12-15~-12h13p12------------------------------------------------------------------
---------------------12--13p12-------12--------------------12-12h13-12~~-s10-8h10p8---
-------------------------------14p12----12-12-12-12~~12h14----------------------------
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-------10-------------------------------------------------------------------15--15p12-
---8------11b12--12--12h13p12----12----------------------12-15-15s17--15h17-----------
-9---9------------------------14----12-------------12h14------------------------------
---------------------------------------12s10s9--12------------------------------------
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--15p12--13p12--------------------15b17r15--------------------15p12-------------------
---------------14p12-14p12-12-12~----------14-14-12~-------12-------14p12-14b16-12~---
-----------------------------------------------------12h14----------------------------
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--------------------------------10-----------10---------------------------------------
-12h13-13p12--12p10-10p8--10b12----12r10-8---10b12-8h10p8--10b12r10-8-10p8---8--8h10--
---------------------------------------------------------------------------9----------
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--8--------------------
----7h9-7--------------
----------9-7p5-----5~~
----------------7p5----
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